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Flash: Close Encounter

by Dreamer 

Posted: 02 May 2008
Word Count: 365
Summary: For the challenge, inspired, fittingly, by Prosp's ongoing 'close encounter' with his wife... until she flies back to Dubai


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John smiled, looking at himself as if through a mirror, the sunshine accentuating the morning stubble. He ran his hand down his cheek and along his chin. Instead of the familiar feel of hairs vibrating over the ridges of his fingers, like the needle of a phonograph over the vinyl grooves on a record, producing a sound he could both feel and hear, his hand glided over satin skin; a different sensation. Sensual. Almost erotic.

He glanced at the dark crystal resting on the table, bought on a whim in a bazaar on a nameless street in a village found on no map. He hadn’t believed the wizened, turbaned man but he had been up for a lark, what could it hurt? His wife too had been game, had looked at it as a sex toy. But it was no toy. He knew that now.

Outside the trees glimmered in the sun, a deep shade of purple.

He rubbed his eyes and reached for his coffee. The steam hung over the surface rising lazily into the room, a strange aroma, not what he remembered. He took a sip and pulled back. It tasted different as well. Not like coffee at all.

John smiled in understanding. So all the sensations were different: colours, taste and smell. He hadn’t expected that. He reached for the dark crystal. It pulsated in front of him. Across the table, his hand did the same.

His wife spoke and his voice sounded different. He answered and hers too was changed.
Sound, sight taste and smell, all different, unique to each, a personal experience. Without the crystal how could one know? How could one guess? One person’s green was another’s purple, one’s coffee another’s ginger. Without a common frame of reference no one could know.

He wondered how long it would last, when they’d switch back, and wished he’d paid more attention.


Their eyes met and they both smiled.

Touch. How could he forget? That too was different. The nipples under his nightgown stiffened in anticipation and he rose to follow his wife into the bedroom; perhaps they’d have time for once more.
Sex as a woman was a totally different experience…







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tusker at 06:39 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Very good Brian. A painless sex change. Great idea. Where's the crystal? Always say that in my next life, I'll come back for an easier time as a man.

Jennifer

Elbowsnitch at 07:26 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Wicked, Brian - I'll leave all further comment to Prosp!

Frances

tiger_bright at 10:08 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Hi Brian, have you noticed how so many of us have plumped for sex as the theme for Prospero's challenge? Does that say something about us, or something about Prosps? Anyway, I love this. Funny, sexy and clever.

Tiger

V`yonne at 10:14 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Excellent, excellent!!!

Sound, sight taste and smell, all different, unique to each, a personal experience. Without the crystal how could one know? How could one guess? One person’s green was another’s purple, one’s coffee another’s ginger. Without a common frame of reference no one could know.


We all know this don't we don't we...yet we never get to experience it - uless Brian is writing of course.

Utterly superative! Knock-out Brian! Where's it going? Don't give it away.

Oonah

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Sex as a woman was a totally different experience…

Do you suppose he found out what a non-event feels like, then?

Jumbo at 15:01 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Brian

Brilliant writing, I have to say. More sex, but then, what the hell!

And what an amazing twist from that prompt. (The group has posted a great batch of stories again this week!)

I loved your final pararaph, especially

The nipples under his nightgown stiffened in anticipation and he rose to follow his wife into the bedroom; perhaps they’d have time for once more.

...the hoping for enough time to do it one more time again...

Ace!

Regards

john

crowspark at 15:42 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Very good, Brian. Lovely writing.

One person’s green was another’s purple, one’s coffee another’s ginger.


I find this so true, especially when I shop from one of my wife's shopping lists!

Thanks for the read.

Bill


tractor at 16:50 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Hi Brian,

role reversal and close encounters all in one.

Cheers

Mark

optimist at 18:06 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Hi Brian - yes, wicked

bought on a whim in a bazaar on a nameless street in a village found on no map
Love this - and the coffee tasting different.

Gorgeous writing.

sarah

Dreamer at 21:16 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Thanks Jennifer, glad you liked it.

Often thought such a crystal would be useful.



B.

Dreamer at 21:17 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Thanks Frances.

B.

Dreamer at 21:20 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Does that say something about us, or something about Prosps?


Clearly it is a reflection on Prosp. Any guy who tells you his wife, who he has not seen in weeks, is coming for a visit and then sets a theme of 'Close Encounter', can't expect any different.

No internet access my eye. The randy bugger probably still hasn't come up for air!

Glad you liked it! Prosp's challenges always seem to bring out the best in me.

B.

Dreamer at 21:23 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Utterly superative! Knock-out Brian!


Cutting and pasting that on my wall! Thanks Oonah.

Do you suppose he found out what a non-event feels like, then?


This has cracked me up all morning! Love the way you Brits have of saying things. We would just say something crass like: 'Do you think he's experienced not coming yet?'
Your way is so much more sophisticated!

Thanks for the positive comments and the smile.

B.



Dreamer at 21:24 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
hoping for enough time to do it one more time again...


Don't we all...

Thanks for the really positive comments. Really appreciated!

Best,

Brian.

Dreamer at 21:28 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Ah Bill...
I find this so true, especially when I shop from one of my wife's shopping lists!


Perhaps if you tried my crystal before going shopping... But then that would be a pretty poor use of its powers...

Thanks for the positive comments.

B.

Dreamer at 21:28 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Thanks Mark,

Briana.

Dreamer at 21:29 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Thanks Sarah,

Pleased you liked it.

B.

Dreamer at 03:45 on 04 May 2008  Report this post
Oonah,

Where's it going? Don't give it away.


Told you before, neophyte as far a subbing goes. Any suggestions?



B.



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