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Peckham 1954

by Mickey 

Posted: 02 May 2008
Word Count: 1067
Summary: One of my favourite poets is the late Sir John Betjeman whose blank verse autobiography ‘Summoned by Bells’ I have on a cassette read by the author. I’ve never seen this poem ‘in the flesh’ as it were but I love his reading of it. I thought that I would try a mini version about my life in London as a child. I’m not sure if I have succeeded however, as I seem to lapse into rhyme throughout. As this is such a departure from my normal stuff, your comments would be especially appreciated


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Peckham, 1954

(‘The Golden Eagle’, the Grand Surrey Canal, and Cobourg Road School)


‘SALOON BAR’ in acid-etched lettering
on the fixed half casement pane;
the outside walls of Dutch-glazed brick
of that strange, Victorian, brewery brown;
the cellar’s shutters black with pitch
to protect its contents from the rain
and through which, weekly, seasoned casks
of Charrington’s Mild Ale were lowered down
to sate the thirsts of the working class
and world war-wearied Peckham throats,
while the drayman’s pair, denied of grass,
would nuzzle at their nose-bagged oats.

‘The Golden Eagle’ announced the approach
to Trafalgar Bridge, that carried these folk
across the turgid Surrey Canal where, formerly, below
the barges, full of timber bound for Glengall Wharf
were pulled by steaming Shires plodding slow
the hoof-worn tow path from the north
and Russia Dock in Rotherhith.
And on the other side, beyond the bridge,
lies Willowbrook Road,
its name recalling an area more green,
but which now just consisted of serried rows
of prefabs where my Granny lived,
across from the laundry, at no.13

Sat on the corner of Neate Street and Trafalgar Avenue,
its former neighbours since demolished or blown to bits
without a ‘please’ or ‘thank you’ by the council
or the well-remembered doodlebugs
and the bombing suffered in the Blitz,
as a child, four times a day, I’d pass the pub
to Waite Street and the alleyway
between St Mark’s and the pickling works
and then, emerging by the church, I’d cross
to school in Cobourg Road where, carved in stone
and set in brickwork gothic and ornate
by some stone-cold Victorian mason,
were tablets set above two separate gates,
one for us ‘BOYS’ and one for the ‘GIRLS’
Wind-lashed latrines across the open playground,
and windows set high to divert the distractions
that might have intruded from the outside world.

Within those gates, our kindly masters, recently de-mobbed,
and cardiganed school-ma’ams, with spinsterish bobs,
(sadly every one of them now long since gone)
taught us to read and write, add up, subtract, along
with all manner of other interesting things –
how Caesar crossed the Rubicon
and the names of all our English Kings.
We practiced our ’Marie Anderson’ hand
In chalk on wood-framed ancient slate
(a backward step, I’ve always thought,
when compared to our parents’ copperplate)
but, by then of course, it was far too late.
For, in the fifties’ post-war Britain, ‘progress’
was well and truly in full swing
with a freshly crowned young Princess
(although the country mourned a much loved King)

--ooOoo--

Each dinner time I’d re-cross the bridge
back to the prefab in Willowbrook Road
where Nan would have my noon meal waiting
on the fold-down table. With a ‘nice’ cup of tea
or, sometimes, in the built-in fridge,
a green-topped bottle of Sukie Sunkist orange
bought from the milkman especially for me.
Ocassionally, the scruffy rag-and-bone man
would lay-in-Waite Street outside the gates
of old St Marks, enticing little girls and boys
with his ‘Empire Made’ cheap plastic toys.
Then I would run and beg my Nan
for Pop’s ‘old’ trousers for the rag-and-bone man.
And, with a penn’orth of plastic that would always break
somewhere between the alley and the school yard gate
I would be happy with my trouser-paid-for ware
(while my Granddad had to work a week
to earn another pair)

My childhood home was a two-bedroom flat
in Great Dover Street near the Borough Underground -
beside ‘The Roebuck’ pub and bound by Trinity and Globe.
A recently erected block to which we had removed
from Hubert House behind the Tabard Park
where Mum would walk me in my reins
and Dad would push me on the swings.
Shere House, though, had such things
as a shute for rubbish which I liked.
It also had an Otis lift and a lock-up for my bike.
We lived on the third floor at no.37
and, being born too late to have felt the pain
or heard the noise or tears of war,
bomb-sites seemed a playground heaven
I made tomahawks with other boys.
The handles we shaped
from exposed wall laths with our knives
and the heads we fashioned from the broken slates
of older, sadder, broken lives.
But, on Saturdays, Mum and Dad would take me
the mile on the bus down the Old Kent Road,
past ‘The Dun Cow’ pub to Nan and Pop’s for tea
of sandwiches, and cake, and jam and bread,
and possibly a soft boiled egg,
then at seven o’clock it was off to ‘Ted’s’

--ooOoo--

Mabel and Ted ran ‘The Golden Eagle’
so Ted gave the pub its more popular name,
and Dad and Pop would leave Willowbrook early
determined they didn’t miss out on their game
of shove ha’penny played on the brass-wired table,
like warm polished silk, worn satiny smooth,
and later, as soon as the ladies were able,
having cleared all the tea things and left-over food
they would dress me up in my Cobourg blue blazer
and off we would go, arriving later than the men.
The ha’pennies were ‘kissing’ and nudging by then.
The air was thick with cigarette smoke,
and the tables full of dark bottled stout,
and, there amongst Peckham’s kind-hearted folk,
this was my family’s big night out.

I would be left to sit outside that very pane
where the opaque etched window ‘SALOON BAR’ said
with a bag of Crisps and a lemonade,
the Smiths with their salt in a blue waxed twist
and the bottle of Bob White’s locally made.
While just inside the brown glazed walls, again and again,
I’d hear raucous cheers and calls at another filled-up bed,
and laughter and much homely talk.
Then Mum would bring me out some chalk.
and on the cellar doors, pitch black and matt
I would draw a dog or cat and, peering nervously
through the doors would beg my Mum “Come out again
and tell me what you think of that?”
The last bus back to the ‘Bricklayers Arms’
we would catch from just south of Trafalgar Bridge
and we’d see the friends that we’d left at Ted’s
from the seats on the northbound 63.
The last short leg home Dad would carry me
sat on his shoulders broad and strong,
and I knew that nothing could ever go wrong,
while the barges continued to carry their load
and while there was ‘Ted’s’ and Cobourg Road.






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James Graham at 19:50 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Seems very quiet in WW - Bank Holiday weekend? I think I'm going to enjoy this. Comment soon.

James.

joanie at 20:14 on 03 May 2008  Report this post
Mike, I just LOVE John Betjeman too. I enjoyed this very much, but I need time to comment. There is just so much here!

Joan

joanie at 22:43 on 04 May 2008  Report this post
Mike, I have now read this more carefully and have been moved to laughter, wry smiles, tears even! Although I am from another part of England from you, the memories are so similar. The images here are just so wonderfully evocative. I can't even begin to highlight my favourites!

Fantastic!

Joan

James Graham at 20:28 on 05 May 2008  Report this post
You find yourself lapsing into rhyme? I wish I could do that! It must come naturally to you and I think this poem would be better rhymed than unrhymed. The rhyme wouldn’t have to be in a regular pattern, but because the poem has quite a light, conversational tone the rhymes could be scattered fairly haphazardly. Not all lines would have to rhyme, so long as there were no long unrhymed passages. Your rhyming lines remind me more of Tony Harrison (‘Long Distance II’) than Betjeman, and I think that sort of style suits the subject better.

If you wanted to make it rhyme more consistently, there are bits you could leave out or condense. For example, ‘My childhood home...push me on the swings’ is mostly rather matter-of-fact - street names, where the house was, ‘recently erected’ - more matter-of-fact certainly compared with the very engaging last two sections about Ted’s. If you were to give the whole thing a going over and cut or abridge a few passages that are less lively, completing the rhyming would be that bit easier.

The end of this same stanza is much better, more particular and personal:

being born too late to have felt the pain
or heard the noise or tears of war,
bomb-sites seemed a playground heaven...


and the telling comment about

the broken slates
of older, sadder, broken lives.


A touch of Tony Harrison here! And this is one of many places where the rhyme workls well.

So this particular stanza (‘My childhood home...broken lives’) is one example of unevenness in the poem. Maybe you would find a few other bunches of lines here and there that could be left out of condensed.

I mentioned the last two sections, and they are especially good, I think - full of period detail such as shove-ha’penny and Smiths Crisps with the little blue salt-bag. The whole child’s-eye view of the pub is very attractive. There are vivid personal details too (the kind many readers could share) especially the drawings on the cellar doors. There are lots of these elsewhere in the poem, but they’re most concentrated here. I like the lines on school too.

James.


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