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Catching bubbles

by joanie 

Posted: 02 April 2008
Word Count: 43
Summary: Very much a 'flash' - in between feeding the neighbour's cats and getting dinner!


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Close, touching,
brushing my skin with
their fragile mix
of water, air
and ........

Light, drifting,
wafting away from me
when I reach out
to connect
with .........

Breath soft
with promise of dreams
which whisper
until I have
to ........

catch bubbles.







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Inspiration at 19:56 on 02 April 2008  Report this post
Very much an inspirational 'flash' if I may say so. I love the layout, and it has a fragile, floaty style, which really captures the delicateness of the bubbles.

Thank you for joining in with the challenge, Joanie.

XXInniXX

joanie at 20:03 on 02 April 2008  Report this post
Enjoyed it, Inni. I desperately need something to make me DO it!!

joanie

Inspiration at 20:28 on 02 April 2008  Report this post
I am so glad I gave you that push then! Don't stop now...

XXInniXX

V`yonne at 15:57 on 04 April 2008  Report this post
wonderful structure joanie and I'm sorry I read it because it would have wowed me in the competition but I just came over here this week as a favour and I promise that I will not read any more poetry on here after this week 1 until the competition is over...

Loved it. Really really...

joanie at 19:14 on 04 April 2008  Report this post
Thanks so much, Oonah!

joanie

MarlaD at 15:49 on 05 April 2008  Report this post
Simply beautiful x

joanie at 16:13 on 05 April 2008  Report this post
Thank you, Maria. Much appreciated.

joanie


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