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A Kiss

by sebastian08 

Posted: 28 March 2008
Word Count: 85
Summary: This is a vaguely erotic poem that I recently wrote, inspired as it says be a dream.


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I dreamed of you, last night.
We kissed, chaste and like the first
So full of possibilities.
Then again and deeper, our tongues
Touching moist and soft.

And naked now, my hand caressed
Your neck, your small and perfect breast.
We danced the dance eternal, natural
Side by side in slow and perfect rhythm
Skin to skin and heart to heart.

Then after lying close and
Smiling, laughing, loving
Kisses soft and sweet
‘Til claimed once more by sleep.
Last night I dreamed of you






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Account Closed at 10:38 on 04 April 2008  Report this post
Very warm and erotic - I liked this very much. I'd change the "Til" to "Until" though - as you don't need the archaic language as it doesn't fit in. Otherwise, grand!

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