I am Woman: 21st Century Gal
Posted: 07 April 2003 Word Count: 199
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The games we once played, ...Seems like many years ago today. You offered me your hand in matrimony, I took it graciously; I asked not a question, Not even foreseeable was my destination. I was your wife and object, Your unequal pacifist. Today,I do just as I please - There is absolutely no need to chauffer me. No husband have I to tame and tie me down. Nor children to run me ragged and drive me wild. I petitioned to vote and burned my bra. I revolutionised an era, I have come oh so very far. Oh yes, my skirts are short and pencil thin, Skimming the trim figure I am now comfortable in. I am woman strong and proud, I am woman bold...and sometimes wild. Occassionally puffing on a Marlborought Light. Leisurely I sip courvoisier and full bodied red wine. I read the Guardian and listen to the news; I possess an opinion, And express my views too. I budget my bills AND buy my own shoes. I fancy you ...and (quite a few)other men too. Not your rival am I hoping to be Just woman strong and proud ...and defiant too?
Lauren PaigeĐcopyright 4/02/03. All rights reserved
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Account Closed at 15:24 on 09 April 2003
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Lauren
Your eulogy for separation/divorce? Comes across clear and wonderfully strong. I like it. Wrote my (male?) equivalent a few years ago. Hope you'll get as much pleasure re-reading yours over time, as I do mine.
Enjoy your new life. (Why did I bother saying that? You obviously do!)
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Hendrix at 14:21 on 10 April 2003
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A comment from a man! Positive. No I am not a radical feminist, but yes I, and I am sure many other women are enjoying the concept of(post?)modernity.
Regards
Lauren Paige
P.s I would love to hear your equivalent.
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Hilary Custance at 12:49 on 11 April 2003
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Lauren, thanks for sending me a welcome. Your poem must work at an interesting level. I felt very at home with it, a strong sense of belonging and yet, except for a short patch in the middle (from 'children' to 'wild'), I am not the person you describe. Your strength is in making the picture so powerful and attractive that I was happy to inhabit it temporarily, without any desire for it in real life.
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Hendrix at 23:35 on 11 April 2003
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The permeation of ideology - everything makes sense when dealt with in context. Approached with open-mindedness/honesty and perceived with appropriation.
One must not be half-hearted. By examing contradictory pairs of concepts one is liberated from social (discursive)constructions.
Lauren Paige
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poemsgalore at 18:39 on 14 April 2003
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Hi Lauren
A very incisive poem, just a couple of words that in my opinion might be better left out, "revolutionised an era, I have come oh so very far.
And yes, my skirts are short and pencil thin," and "And express my views too." I don't think the 'too' is necessary, but that's just me. A very pleasing poem.
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Hendrix at 02:23 on 15 April 2003
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Perhaps you have a point - on reflection.
Thank you, for your opinion.
Lauren Paige
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Adam at 18:54 on 15 April 2003
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Lauren,
I liked this poem very much. Despite my phallus! It seems to work on so many different levels - feminist liberation, personal freedom, eulogy to love. It seems both defiant and exhilirating. Well done!
Adam x
p.s. I like the 'oh so very far' - it adds a certain sardonic irony which would be lacking otherwise. I think you could leave out 'too' in 'express my views too', although it perhaps adds an emphatic edge?
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Hendrix at 01:00 on 16 April 2003
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Thank you Adam, most constructive and open-minded; with regards to creativity and (the concept of)modernity including its many complexities (and contradictions).
I am glad you were able to appreciate the variety of expression - on more than one lvl!
Lauren Paige
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