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Colonial Road

by  wordman67  ( 161 )

Posted: 21 March 2008
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Summary: A dispatcher at a car/taxi service deals with an uncooperative driver who, it turns out, has a very good reason to fear picking up fares from certain parts of town.


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Posted by :  Jubbly at 14:45 on 25 March 2008
Hi Wordman, I found this a compelling read and very scary. I did wonder how it could be staged as there is so little action and you probably don't want actors pretending to be driving. However it would be a challenge for any director and I'm sure could work. I did get slightly confused toward the end as there seemed to be an air of maleovence coming from Ray, did he cause 43's crash or was it something creepier? I was left wanting to know more, was the father guilty? Did Ray know all along? Maybe I missed something so forgive me for being thick. I did really enjoy it though and would love to see it staged.

All the best

Julie
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