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A lovely sunrise
Posted: 27 February 2008
Word Count: 10
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Unable to sleep
Staring at computer screens
Beauty passes by
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 joanie at 07:24 on 27 February 2008
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Lovely, Rob. I have noticed recently that the gorgeous sky at dawn lasts only seconds sometimes. Glad you caught it!
joanie
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 Beanie Baby at 07:53 on 27 February 2008
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Lovely haiku, Rob. It is very deep and meaningful without being cluttered - a balance that is not always easy to achieve!
Beanie
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smudger at 08:58 on 27 February 2008
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I like this, Rob, especially the last line, which has such a wistful quality.
Tony
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MarlaD at 10:14 on 27 February 2008
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This is amazing..to sum up the long time, the modern time and the forever in 10 words is quite something..beautiful x
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Rainstop at 11:48 on 02 March 2008
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Hi Rob,
It reminds me of that REM track, Day Sleeper, which contains the line | I see the day in a newsprint grey |
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or something like that.
Anyway, nice one.
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