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A lovely sunrise

by RobD 

Posted: 27 February 2008
Word Count: 10

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Unable to sleep
Staring at computer screens
Beauty passes by

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joanie at 07:24 on 27 February 2008  Report this post
Lovely, Rob. I have noticed recently that the gorgeous sky at dawn lasts only seconds sometimes. Glad you caught it!


Beanie Baby at 07:53 on 27 February 2008  Report this post
Lovely haiku, Rob. It is very deep and meaningful without being cluttered - a balance that is not always easy to achieve!

smudger at 08:58 on 27 February 2008  Report this post
I like this, Rob, especially the last line, which has such a wistful quality.

MarlaD at 10:14 on 27 February 2008  Report this post
This is amazing..to sum up the long time, the modern time and the forever in 10 words is quite something..beautiful x

Rainstop at 11:48 on 02 March 2008  Report this post
Hi Rob,
It reminds me of that REM track, Day Sleeper, which contains the line
I see the day in a newsprint grey
or something like that.

Anyway, nice one.

Account Closed at 21:25 on 17 March 2008  Report this post
Yes. Very poignant and perfectly correct too!


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