Barstools and Locals: By Scott Evans and Andrew Flaherty by The Mighty Mouse

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Barstools and Locals: By Scott Evans and Andrew Flaherty

by The Mighty Mouse

Posted: 13 February 2008
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Summary: Barstools and Locals revolve around the life of central character Ben Barsteward and his constant struggle to keep the family business afloat while the rest of his family, friends and employees reek havoc in the most strangest and explosive ways. The world of Barstools and Locals is no normal place: monsters, gangsters, fearsome hunter ladies and much more, make life for Ben extremely difficult, and the help of his brother Tony only makes every that is bad, terrible.

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The Mighty Mouse at 09:24 on 13 February 2008 Report this post

Hello everyone.

We are getting ready to send this script off and would appreciate any comments or advice you fine people may have.

Thank you

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The Mighty Mouse at 21:44 on 13 February 2008 Report this post

Any comments please?

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foundit at 10:49 on 18 February 2008 Report this post

Hi have just read your script for Tv.

My opinion for what it's worth.
Slow descriptive start then action all the way to the end.
It is the first time I have read anything in this kind of format.
My comments can only be as an outsider.

Interesting, sounds very visual, (If that makes sense) I would think from the picture it paints, highly comical.

I wish you all the best with this

Regards Joe

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