e.e.cummings
Posted: 12 October 2003 Word Count: 117 Summary: A river runs through e.e.cummings home county called
'The River Mystic'
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e.e.Cummings I He jumped (from a moving Dodge) but soon learnt how to fall awkward as ice-cream (dropped on Mystic beach). He tripped the purpose of strides like donkey rides (to nowhere special) dramatics paused by thin cups of black small print written large (as any funhouse). II Thought showed us a new move off the top of his nib, like squibs of Mozart's ink flicked from a fake baton, or the tapping snaps & crackles of showering meteorites, as they spit into the wind of watching breaths. Tricky honey plopped from the spoon, my tongue still juggles for the first sweetness, rolling the lather of words into speech , bubbles popped by your sharp lips. John.G.Hall©2003
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Taupe at 12:03 on 01 November 2003
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I'm supposed to be a site expert but have been dragging my heels because of lack of internet expertise. I hope this gets through. I've chosen it as my first to comment on because it was posted on my birthday and I've always admired cummings. Do you know his wonderful autobiography/war memoir 'The Enormous Room'? I like your poem a lot, particularly the second section. The language is fizzy ( mischievously Mozartian! ) and the imagery playfully sensuous in the best cummings vein. I take the poem's speaker to be a synthesis of you and the master, and as such he certainly appeals to my imagination. When I get the hang of this, I'll take a look at other poems of yours.
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tinyclanger at 14:16 on 30 April 2004
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Hi John, got to this from your latest piece and I'm glad found it. As you're probably aware, some of us have been looking at ee cummings in the Poetry Seminar Group this week and as I am becoming particularly interested in him, I was delighted to read this.
I think you capture cummings voice splendidly, yet it always remains your own, too. Enjoyed the last section particularly, "rolling the lather" - nicely ambiguous, I felt, as as Taupe said, sensuous.
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