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Man is an Animal

by Rai15 

Posted: 11 October 2003
Word Count: 84

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My death would be a release for all the anger in this world.
As my blood flows through your glasses it carries my rage.
Ready for you to ingest, my hatred will spread.
As you sip from my cup of despair you will feel my pain as it blackens your eyes.
And while you writhe in agony your body will exhale all the emotions you trap for success.
So, if you kill me today, the earth will once again bear witness to the truth.

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dr_mandrill at 18:44 on 11 October 2003  Report this post
dear rai,

your body will exhale all the emotions you trap for success

...is the best line I've heard all day. I like the bitterness in this thankless martyrdom, and the way you leave it ambiguous as to whether it's kill or cure. Nice one.


Rai15 at 14:53 on 14 October 2003  Report this post
Thank you for your comment, I was worried it might sound slightly preachy or a tad too high & mighty for anyone to like it. Maybe I was wrong...


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