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Animal

by Bobo 

Posted: 10 October 2003
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I bark.
I howl.
You are horrified.
Looks so sweet,
how can it be
there's such a wildness
inside?

I screech.
Then hiss.
You look oh-so afraid.
I see it
in your cold grey eyes -
regret at what
you've made.






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Fearless at 09:53 on 10 October 2003  Report this post
is this a creature that was 'made' as in created, or changed?

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Bobo at 10:51 on 10 October 2003  Report this post
...maybe a bit of both Fearless.

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peterxbrown at 00:33 on 11 October 2003  Report this post
You have a great knack at writing creatively and powerfully creating metaphors which suggest meanings on several levels at once.An unbridled natural desire shattered with the distasteful look of rejection.
love and respect
peterb xx
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Bobo at 10:07 on 26 October 2003  Report this post
Thanks so much Peter - that's probably the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me! I've gone all gooey!

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