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Picked on.

by Bobo 

Posted: 09 October 2003
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Why me?
Why me?
This isn't how it's meant to be.

SLAG
SLUT
BITCH
TART -
that's how it all began.

No warning,
out of nowhere
you swarmed down on me.
Fed on me.
Devoured my spirit.

Walking corpse,
no self-respect.
Degraded,
debased,
spat upon.

WHY ME?
WHY ME?
This isn't how
it's meant to be.









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Fearless at 21:04 on 09 October 2003  Report this post
You're right
That's not how it is meant to be
It doesn't have to be you
Our chains are imaginary
It is possible to be free

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Bobo at 21:14 on 09 October 2003  Report this post
That's exactly what Bobo told me - without actually speaking of course...
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roger at 21:25 on 09 October 2003  Report this post
Well I'm with Fearless on this one, Bobo...and anyway, as 'Teddy Club Leader', you shouldn't really be writing this sort of thing, good though it is.
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Fearless at 21:25 on 09 October 2003  Report this post
He's a tip-top bloke then.

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The Walrus at 22:10 on 09 October 2003  Report this post
I love your use of caps.

The Walrus
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Bobo at 09:08 on 10 October 2003  Report this post
Sorry Roger - I know this isn't in keeping with my new position - maybe I should've written it under a pseudonym ( sp? )?

BoBo x

PS Am working on uniform designs...essentially furry, though mottled with a number of patches!
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roger at 09:15 on 10 October 2003  Report this post
Yes...you see Bo, you really must learn to think things through. Good job I was available to put you right!
This uniform thing is worrying me, Bo. We'll end up looking silly, which isn't the aim at all. Please reconsider just sticking with the badge plan.
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