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on reflection

by Ellenna 

Posted: 08 October 2003
Word Count: 65
Summary: talking to myself..

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stepping on sand
no imprint
is this how you make your mark
on love and land
no trace
side stepping
brushing hair from your face
eyes scanning
words lost to the wind
for the sake of peace
waves carry those echoes
to rebound on rocks
and drift in a skein
of trailing wild geese
blue sky, blue eye,
blue thoughts
did i chase you away?

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riotous at 11:01 on 15 October 2003  Report this post
this is delicate. lovely rhythms. ending is wonderful. really good poem. strong. thanks. jai

Ellenna at 15:44 on 24 October 2003  Report this post
Hi jai..I thought this had gone unnoticed..so thank you very much for your comments :)

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