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Caring

by hailfabio 

Posted: 24 October 2007
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I guess I stopped caring
once I realised that the Universe
didn’t revolve around me.






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Account Closed at 11:04 on 26 October 2007  Report this post
Very thought-provoking indeed. I do like the mix of humour and wry disbelief!

:))

A
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Beanie Baby at 21:36 on 06 November 2007  Report this post
It is alwys an epiphony of a moment when you realise this but you have caught it brilliantly well with all the shock and horror of someone throwing a bucket of cold water over you! Real awakening stuff!
Beanie
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smudger at 20:57 on 23 December 2007  Report this post
I smiled with recognition on reading this; very funny and true.
Tony
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