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The Poetry Brothel

by Mickey 

Posted: 18 October 2007
Word Count: 107
Summary: Some of you may recall my recommending a Brighton Festival fringe venue calling itself ‘The Poetry Brothel’ back in May? The poets there gave ‘private’ readings in a tongue-in-cheek brothel setting. They also invited punters to leave written comments which they pinned up on the wall during the course of the week. This is the comment that I dropped through their letterbox.


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I wonder as we climb the stairs
how far ‘La Pute’ will go –
A ‘quickie’ three-line Haiku?
or a thirteen-line Rondeau?
Or all the way with one long Lay?
(Or if I’ll get to know!)
But now we’re here and on her bed
I must seem such an amateur
as rhyming thoughts flee from my head
when faced with her Rictameter
“What’s it to be?”, she’s asking me,
“I won’t consent to kiss.
No Villanelle to kiss and tell,
No Double Tetractys
She’s teasing me I’ll not forget
that surely I can come again
for Sonnets or her Triolet
and snort four lines of pure Quatrain?






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Mickey at 16:26 on 18 October 2007  Report this post
PS The Poetry Brothel won a mini-oscar award from the Festival organisers

V`yonne at 17:17 on 18 October 2007  Report this post
Excellent!! :)

joanie at 20:12 on 18 October 2007  Report this post
Hi Mike. Good to see you! This is brilliant. I still love clever rhymes; you are great at it!

joanie

Elsie at 22:08 on 20 October 2007  Report this post
Mickey, well done on your mini-oscar! Good to see you posting!

Mickey at 10:49 on 22 October 2007  Report this post
LC, No, it wasn't my poem, it was the event itself that won the award - although I did vote for them in 'The Argus' (who were giving out the 'gongs') Thanks for reading me though. Mike


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