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No Rag-doll

by Bobo 

Posted: 07 October 2003
Word Count: 29


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Sit up,
Take note.
Read
my
lips.
Iím not here
to keep
you amused.
Iím no doll,
no puppet,
no toy.
You must
have me
confused

with
someone
else.






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Ellenna at 19:49 on 07 October 2003  Report this post
Bobo .. this is so good.. the format reinforces the punchiness of thought..lol :)

Ellie

Bobo at 07:19 on 08 October 2003  Report this post
Thanks so much Ellie - I'm glad you like it. I wanted it to be a bit of a 'kick in the teeth' poem, so I'm relieved the punchiness worked for you.

Lisa ( BoBo )
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Fearless at 19:09 on 09 October 2003  Report this post
I liked the format, it's stark, devoid of ambiguity.

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