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Too Good To Be True

by Bobo 

Posted: 05 October 2003
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So handsome
So charming
So clever
Disarming

Too handsome
Charisma
Overload
Alarming

Unfaithful
Heartbreak
Deep pain
And harming






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Fearless at 14:47 on 05 October 2003  Report this post
Reading this, I would be unsure as to whether leave him or vote for him......but seriously, it is unfortunately an everyday tragedy.

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Bobo at 14:56 on 05 October 2003  Report this post
Mmm...he was a waste of an entire decade...not that I'm at all bitter, of course!

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Fearless at 14:57 on 05 October 2003  Report this post
But when does one realise that its been wasted? Afterwards? During? Something kept one there for a decade - what?

F (who has some experience of this too, from way back when)
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Rai15 at 15:51 on 05 October 2003  Report this post
I know that eventually all my comments will sound like a scratched record, but I do really like this poem. Well done it is a brilliant piece.

~Rai~
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Bobo at 16:27 on 05 October 2003  Report this post
Fearless - strangely, fear kept me with him. I was so amazed when I left him just how strong I could be. Plus, you know when you're with someone who everyone else thinks is fantastic and they keep telling you how lucky you are etc...well, you just figure that this must be the best you can ever do, the most you can ever expect out of a relationship.

Rai - thanks so much. I don't mind you sounding like a scratched record if it means you keep saying nice things about my poems!

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