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Senryu

by Dreamchameleon 

Posted: 09 September 2007
Word Count: 27
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The mouse
Clicking on the inbox,
Speaks of love..

Inside the box
Thoughts of love
Turn to lust

At the cybercafe
She writes giddy verse.
Lust- moist







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joanie at 21:15 on 11 September 2007  Report this post
Well, DC, you certainly sent me off 'googling'! I am now pondering Senryu - it's fascinating. I do like the last stanza(?) particularly. You have captured a moment and an emotion.

Enjoyable.

joanie
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