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Brochure Bargain

by joanie 

Posted: 26 August 2007
Word Count: 28
Summary: Is it worth it?
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The searing sun
is fine
if you like the heat

a hotel pool
sounds good
when sunbeds are free

a thousand pounds
is less
than a lifetime's debt.









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V`yonne at 11:35 on 27 August 2007  Report this post
You are tempting me!!
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Shika at 15:08 on 27 August 2007  Report this post

Very well observed and ironic. I liked this a lot. S
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joanie at 21:07 on 27 August 2007  Report this post
V'yonne, Shika, many thanks for reading. Shika, I'm glad it came across as I intended!

joanie
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Elsie at 20:49 on 30 August 2007  Report this post
Joanie - A follow-up to your 'Holiday'! I'll stick with the wellies and the leather again... Very nice and brief as usual!
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joanie at 21:20 on 02 September 2007  Report this post
Thanks, Elsie!

Joan
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