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by LONGJON 

Posted: 01 October 2003
Word Count: 36
Summary: Something Light !
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I bark out the orders to the wandering words
To form up in quatrains and couplets

But they take
not a blind
bit of no tice
so

stuff the m is all
i can

sa y!






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Account Closed at 20:43 on 02 October 2003  Report this post
I'm still laughing!!!! There could be a whole series of these, you know - and I know exactly what you're saying!

Anne B
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Barney at 10:18 on 04 October 2003  Report this post
Good fun and a clever idea. I think there's scope for a longer piece; for the words to really run riot!
--Barney
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peterxbrown at 23:48 on 10 October 2003  Report this post
This is a gem Little John!
Your poem is great fun! It has the quality of McGough and is full of life.
Brilliant!
peter b
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