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by hailfabio 

Posted: 04 June 2007
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Trying to describe it,
I’d rather prescribe it.

Her hand in mine,
there’s no need for time.

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joanie at 16:56 on 04 June 2007  Report this post
Hi Stephen. That's lovely! Why waste time trying to say what it's like when you can simply say 'Go on, try it!'

The last line is very profound, I think! It has made me ponder already about what 'time' is!

Holding hands is excellent, isn't it??


Beanie Baby at 21:22 on 06 June 2007  Report this post
Beautiful - full of tenderness and love. Bewitching piece.

hailfabio at 12:23 on 07 June 2007  Report this post
Holding hands is the best, it says so much and is calming.

Thanks for commenting,


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