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Level Crossing Nostalgia

by Mickey 

Posted: 04 June 2007
Word Count: 121
Summary: There’s 2 rail crossings in my home town. One was operated by a signalman turning a huge handwheel, who would wave motorists through with a smile, the other was opened by a resident gatekeeper living in a little cottage with an immaculate tiny garden. Now both are automatic, far more pedestrians/drivers can be frustrated far longer than ever dreamt of before - and with no one to blame! Brilliant isn’t it? Here’s my salute to the gatekeepers, combining happy memories of both crossings:


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Waiting at the unmanned crossing
passage barred by metal beam

(I remembered white gate paintwork,
red disc warnings, ‘Days of Steam’)

The automatic error margin
keep the gates down overlong

(No more the handwheel man obligin’.
His numbered days have long since gone)

Impersonal and Continental
raised by no gatekeeper’s brawn

(No crossing keeper’s garden flowers
or neatly tended cottage lawn)

Just irritating lights and sirens
boasting of the coming train

(The keeper’s cottage windows boarded,
front door vandalised again)

Grasping private operators
fleecing over franchised tracks

(Oh for days of steaming steelwork,
busy branch lines, blackened ‘stacks)

Flash! - the train has passed my crossing.
Far too fast to focus eyes.

Then, sinister, the tensioned barrier
Rattles…..and begins to rise.






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joanie at 16:58 on 04 June 2007  Report this post
Nice one, Mike! We still have the steam train here in the summer, but even that has succumbed to the automatic barrier (not as bad as you describe so well here, though). I think there is a real person somewhere!

Then, sinister, the tensioned barrier
Rattles…..and begins to rise.

is excellent! Scary......

I did enjoy this.

Joan








<Added>

They always used to open one gate then wave you through as they were opening the other one...... far too risky nowadays!

Brian Aird at 10:39 on 05 June 2007  Report this post
This is clever. There are three poems here interwoven (bold, normal and bold+normal). The ryhming joins them as one, but its possible to read them individually. In fact, the text in bold could even be deleted as those brilliant lines at the end, as Joanie observes, are excellent. They say it all.

It reminds me of my holiday in Scotland through manned locks.

Brian

V`yonne at 23:36 on 17 August 2007  Report this post
I think this is my favourite. I can smell the steam. I have my little arm out the sash window and it's getting all sooty - and sweep!! :)


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