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by Otter 

Posted: 11 May 2007
Word Count: 108

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Stepping from this world to the other isn't hard at all.
It's just a bit of climbing as you have to cross the wall.

Within the coolness of the green
Some strange people I have seen
Tall, and light and flickering,
Yet older than the oldest thing.
They carried me right through the air
Upon a bridge that isn't there
I stepped..

The world was changed forever as I turned to bid farewell.
Now and then I have to go and stand upon the hill.
You may catch them unawares as I did upon the mound
But I'm careful that I always keep my feet upon the ground.

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V`yonne at 09:42 on 06 June 2007  Report this post
I like the ideas here but I think they are too rhyme driven. I liked the change of rhythm.

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