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A Wisp of Smoke

by Otter 

Posted: 30 April 2007
Word Count: 94
Summary: just a poem


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Smoldering deep in dry dust undergrowth,
Hardly a whisper of curling smoke,
Not to be seen, a mote.
So slight its scent on steaming noses.
Wildfire! The conflagration
Flames to heaven from heath,
Darkens the very sun
And sterilizes scorched earth.
Leaves ash of rue where forest grew.
Stampeding feet flee before its mirth.

As the faintest zephyr,
Almost a caress on trembling leaf and grassy flower,
Precedes the wildest raging storm
To bend the tallest trees,
Breaks those who don't conform,
Whips oceans into wild spinning cloud
To pelt the shores with power.






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V`yonne at 09:34 on 06 June 2007  Report this post
I liked this one very much. Not sure about

Not to be seen, a mote.


but

Wildfire! The conflagration
Flames to heaven from heath,
Darkens the very sun

is wonderful. You don't need the capitals at the start of each line though. The detract from the meaning and stop the flow.

I'd work on it.


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