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Haiku

by joanie 

Posted: 29 April 2007
Word Count: 13
Summary: 8.25pm - Just phenomenal!
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Like a red balloon
making a statement with wisps
of clouds. Ace sunset






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Beanie Baby at 21:53 on 30 April 2007  Report this post
Oh Joanie. This so soothing and beautiful it almost brought a tear to my eye. Beautifully written with such heart and feeling and contains everything a good haiku should. Brilliant.

Beanie
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joanie at 22:45 on 30 April 2007  Report this post
Thanks, Beanie!

joanie
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Account Closed at 13:43 on 04 May 2007  Report this post
Lovely - and perfect! Made me smile and wish I'd seen it.

:))

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joanie at 15:02 on 04 May 2007  Report this post
Thanks, Holly!

Joan
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smudger at 10:22 on 24 May 2007  Report this post
Hi joanie,
That's a perfect image. Well done. I did trip up over the word 'ace', as it seemed more prosaic than the lyricism which preceded it, but it's a minor quibble.
Tony
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joanie at 14:53 on 24 May 2007  Report this post
Thanks Tony!

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