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Issues

by hailfabio 

Posted: 16 April 2007
Word Count: 8
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Your issues
don't dampen my tissues,
these days.






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roger at 14:50 on 16 April 2007  Report this post
Hi Stephen,

I rarely comment on poetry because I know nothing about it. But I do know that you've told a whole story - goodtimes/bad times/gone times - in just eight words, and to my mind that's pretty damned impressive.

Roger.
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hailfabio at 15:35 on 16 April 2007  Report this post
Thanks Roger,

I'm privilleged that you felt compelled to comment on this peice. As with all my short work, it says more than it actually says, and I like the reader to relate to the peice in their own personal way.

Glad you enjoyed this.

Stephen
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joanie at 21:51 on 16 April 2007  Report this post
I agree, Stephen; an absolute wealth of meaning in 8 words! Well done; I love it.

joanie
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Beanie Baby at 08:37 on 18 April 2007  Report this post
Fantastic piece of work - like the world's shortest novel (or autobiography)! Very clerverly written; don't change a thing. Love it!
Beanie
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smudger at 13:52 on 18 April 2007  Report this post
Hi Stephen. So concise and funny. Excellent.
Tony
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Account Closed at 09:01 on 20 April 2007  Report this post
Wonderful! I love this. A novel in haiku indeed - very "Gone with the Wind"!

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A
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