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Daffodil

by Hooray99 

Posted: 04 March 2007
Word Count: 38
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Green and graceful necks
none the same way turned
aloof
aloft, and poised.
Their bashful brethren hide;
they bide their time
hold their breath
and rest.
Six pointed lemon stars
of spring
Golden centred marvels
Proud, perfect things.






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SOOTYSMUM at 21:03 on 05 March 2007  Report this post
Katherine

I really like this piece, it's simple, unpretencious and cheerful. I especially like

"Six pointed lemon stars of spring"

you immediately picture the exact likeness of the flower head.

Thank you for a bright glimpse of spring to come!

Susan
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