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Sweetest Goal

by Sorrento 

Posted: 14 February 2007
Word Count: 61


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Love is blind so some will say
undoubtedly those who lost their way
clarity seems to light my day, as
your love my heart enures to sway.
Blind love is something I canít see
enduring love the way for me,
Matured, enriched by thoughts of you
Indelibly entwined upon my soul
Naturalised within your love
Evermore my sweetest goal.


Carlton Sorrento






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mermaid at 13:39 on 14 February 2007  Report this post
Hi there Carlton,

This is very fitting for valentine's day! Hope you are giving it to someone deserving.

I would be intrigued to hear about the person you had in mind when you wrote it - I bet that would make another interesting poem.

Mermaid

V`yonne at 13:56 on 15 February 2007  Report this post
Oh melt, melt. You smoothie, you!
It reads beautifully.
Y'yonne


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