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Sounds

by Felmagre 

Posted: 21 September 2003
Word Count: 220


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They whistled in the pubs,
on their way to work;
tunes, the music of their day.
But streets stand silent now;
those days are gone and pasts.
'Tis the songs, they say, to blame,
they've no melody,no words:
though, care, has played its part.

Once, cobbled stones resounded,
to the noise of hobnailed boots,
and the clip, clip, clopping of horses hooves
as iron rimmed wheels roll on.
as well, the far off cry 'Rag and Bones,'
'Rag and Bones' sounding on the morning air.

Dustbin lids; Barking dogs; Howling Cats
and a family quarrel,
disturbs the midnight calm.
The distant purring in the early dawn
of a milkman's soundless float;
Gold tops; Cheese; Eggs; Double Cream,
and the rattling crates of Milk.

The swish of skipping ropes,
the thud of feet;
as hopscotch and tag warm up.
shrieking children at play in the street,
and cries as they fall from their bikes.
Creaking gates on rusty hindges,
as kids, swing on them too and fro.

Not any more these sounds will we hear;
as children forget how to play.
And whistling? Well, that too has gone,
replaced by the jingle of phones.
But what of the boot, the horse and the cart,
the float of the milkman as well?
such gentle sounds are redundant now,
drowned-out by irrelevant noise.











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peterxbrown at 00:43 on 22 September 2003  Report this post
Felmagre! Shame on you! You have created a beautiful word picture of yesterday-year and now I am all nostalgic and misty eyed. How could you!? I particularly love "The distant purring in the early dawn of a milkman's soundless float" Very evocative. I cannot get the images out of my mind now, and a few more keep popping up......scrubbed steps!.. headscarves!.... You have started something now my friend!!!!

Felmagre at 06:20 on 22 September 2003  Report this post
Hello Peterxbrown,
Thank you for your kind comments. Nostalga does have a way of evoking memories doesn't, which is what I wanted this one to do. Yesterday, was a different world and whilst they say progress is good I'm not so sure I agree with them at every turn. I'm pleased the poem worked.

Kind regards
Felmagre


Barney at 00:27 on 23 September 2003  Report this post
Oh my God! I remember the rag and bone man! Such warm and nostalgic sounds compared to the 'jingle' and 'irrelevant noise' of today. There's no pleasure in these new sounds unlike the ones you describe from my 'yoof', when I used to walk up the hill for me hovis etc etc

A pleasure to read. It reminds me that I'm lucky. Who'd be a kid today?

Barney

Felmagre at 09:27 on 23 September 2003  Report this post
Hello Barney,

Thank you for your comments, I'm pleased that the 'mood' came through. Yes, I remember taking my turn walking down to the baker every morning in order to collect a hot crusty loaf, which we all devoured with great enjoyment. Your right whilst today's sounds may be memorable they are in no way enjoyable, nor do I think they will evoke nostalga in years to come, but then who knows!

Felicity.

spud at 21:56 on 23 September 2003  Report this post
Can I join this trip down memory lane? What fantastic imagery - yep, I was there as well. Such care free times (or at least they were to a child).

The 'irrelevant noise' comparison puts me in mind of a conversation I recently had on discovering some old handwritten love letters (now there's a thought!)versus the current trend of texting. 'I luv u' isn't quite the same.

Thanks for the memory

Spud



Felmagre at 22:45 on 23 September 2003  Report this post
Hello Spud,

Of course your welcome to join us. It has been a pleasure to have jogged a few memories.

Kind regards
Felicity.

Meena at 18:13 on 26 September 2003  Report this post
Very nostaligic. Gives me the impression of England pre-digital when we 1st came to UK.
Oh! I remember the milk vans very well because it remained me of our milk man back home who used to bring his cow near our home and milk in front of our eyes - home being India.

Felmagre at 10:36 on 27 September 2003  Report this post
Hello Meena,
Now, that would be interesting to write about. I think the world has moved on but sometimes not for the better, but then life comes in a mixed bag of blessings I suspect.


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