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by Beanie Baby 

Posted: 08 February 2007
Word Count: 25

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He smiles
as a baby in spring,
as a teenager in summer,
as an adult in autumn
and in the winter,
he cries.

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paul53 [for I am he] at 16:24 on 10 February 2007  Report this post
A very concise piece that says much in few words.

Where is everyone else these days?

Beanie Baby at 08:30 on 12 February 2007  Report this post
That's a good question, Paul. I have recently started to host this group in the hope of tempting a few back in but it hasn't worked so far. I think it is such a shame, really, because we must all benefit from challenges like this to keep the creative juces flowing! Hopefully things will pick up soon.

In the meantime, thank you for your comments about my attempt at the challenge. When I suggested the line, it came right out of nowhere so I can honestly say that I did not know how I would tackle it any more than you did; so I was quitre pleased with "Seasons" - especially since I managed it in one draft as I uploaded it!

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