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Kissing It Better

by llydstp 

Posted: 17 September 2003
Word Count: 21
Summary: Don't most of us do this in our relationships?


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Let me intrude
Walk hobnail on your brain
Then kiss the blood
From your sweet head
And make things good again






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Bobo at 20:47 on 17 September 2003  Report this post
Indeed we do! Very amusing and spot on!

BoBo x
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Ellenna at 20:57 on 17 September 2003  Report this post
well done .. you got it!

Ellie:)
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Fearless at 18:38 on 04 March 2004  Report this post
Turning a song title around, it's like 'From a scream to a whisper' (apologies to Allen Toussaint).

fearless
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scoops at 09:28 on 18 November 2004  Report this post
Loved it. Short and to the point. Shyama
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llydstp at 20:44 on 24 November 2004  Report this post
Thank you, Shyama.
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