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Take No Prisoners

by The Walrus 

Posted: 17 September 2003
Word Count: 131
Summary: Nothing flowery about this one. Punctuation is pretty dire as well.


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Whatever you do.
Do it with faith.
Do it with conviction.

Donít listen to the mealy mouths
Borne from shouldersí chips

Donít listen to the voices within, without
Borne from fears and expectations

Set your course
Straight and true.
Donít look back.
Hoist your flag.
Fix your eye
Upon the enchanting horizon

And when youíre blue
Remember.
You always have you.

And the next time someone
Rains on your parade
Smile at their grimace
Steady your heart
Walk your way.

And when the voices gnaw
Cut you to the core
Brandish your sword
Cut them free
Strike upon a path of liberty.

And whatever anybody says
Love, in all its many forms
Is not simply a flight of fancy
It is, beyond doubt,
The reality.

Sing your song
Dance your path.







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Fearless at 19:06 on 17 September 2003  Report this post
I like this a lot and kinda identify with it. It shoots from the hip. I adore the last two stanzas and agree with

'Remember
You always have you'

Ideas, thoughts, opinions and aspirations
- These have little truck with matters of punctuation

Fearless

Bobo at 21:11 on 17 September 2003  Report this post
Spot on Walrus - very powerful and gutsy. I particularly liked 'dance your path'...

BoBo x

The Walrus at 08:52 on 18 September 2003  Report this post
Thanks guys, glad it struck a chord.

The Walrus


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