 riotous at 12:43 on 12 September 2003
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I was drawn to the title of this! and it had me chuckling! very astute and ironic. works well. Jai
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 bjlangley at 14:07 on 15 September 2003
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Excellent.... reminded me of my Mother-In-Law (though that's not so good).
I'm sure you've spotted the typo on line 7, should be a 'y' not a 't', but I'm pedantic.
Prefered the first verse to the second, because I couldn't remember the original tune well enough for the second part!
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peterxbrown at 23:56 on 15 September 2003
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Cheers Paradoxa! I am so glad you share my dubious humour. Shame on you!!
Thanks Bilangley. Well spotted! Its not at all pedantic, I should have noticed. I got close to a Y though didn't I. Not bad for a blind man!
Now you feel guilty don't you!! No!?
The second verse scans what I remember of the tune but it does deteriorate from poor taste to psuedo (very silly) violence.Whimsy of the worst kind if you ask me.
p.s. love to the mother in law.
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chinamummy at 19:02 on 23 September 2003
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Our dear, I'm never going to be able to play my children's music box ever again!You ought to consider finding yourself a musician who is looking for someone to write lyrics.
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Fearless at 21:23 on 27 September 2003
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I like your melody to bloue teddy bears!
F
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sorry, I meant 'blue'!
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pene at 16:16 on 14 October 2003
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great, made me chuckle, I wrote something called amatriptaline city, which I am now going to have to post.
keep writing your very good at it (in my opinion)
best wishes pene
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