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Soul Mates

by hailfabio 

Posted: 16 October 2006
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When strangers meet,
their dreams can pass so quickly.

When soul mates meet,
their dreams last forever.






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Beanie Baby at 11:54 on 16 October 2006  Report this post
This is so true Stephen! There is a huge difference between meeting a stranger and meeting a soulmate. I really like the subtlity of this. It is a very sweet reflection of love.
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joanie at 21:31 on 16 October 2006  Report this post
Hi Stephen. This is wonderfully true. I love the sentiments here; I wonder if you could refine it a bit, for example
their dreams will last forever.


Lovely.

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hailfabio at 22:20 on 16 October 2006  Report this post
How about it now joanie?


Thanks
Stephen
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joanie at 22:38 on 16 October 2006  Report this post
Yes!

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Account Closed at 07:53 on 20 October 2006  Report this post
Lovely! Simple and true! I wonder what it would be like if you divided it into 2 2-line stanzas?? Just a thought ...

:))

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hailfabio at 10:55 on 26 October 2006  Report this post
Yes might be better...

I'm thinking of putting this at the end of my best man's speech, what do you think?

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Account Closed at 07:51 on 27 October 2006  Report this post
Yeah, you should! Definite!

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joanie at 09:02 on 27 October 2006  Report this post
I agree - you should! It's lovely.

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