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Tripping upstream

by jadeddreamer 

Posted: 17 September 2006
Word Count: 108
Summary: Inspiration at 6am. Its form leaves something to be desired but the rest i think i managed to get my purpose across.


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Please feed the inquisitive nature of my soul.
I am curious, I know the normal defintion...
care to enlighten?
Intrigue?
Ahh at last what else the existence of a brook may be?
but to flow and accept that things are the way that they be. What use are labels, boundaries, signs.
So seldom we adhere but pass through those simple lines.
The path that lays ahead is riddled in other dreams, we trip over expectations, muddled in design.
who knew a life of true happiness was something never to be desired.
It was always there, never disappeared, just cloaked by our own eyes in the illusions that appear.






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paul53 [for I am he] at 07:59 on 21 September 2006  Report this post
I noted that you still have no joined a group. You would be better served by doing so, even if this site of late has become curiously quiet.
Inspiration at 6am. Its form leaves something to be desired
This reads as such and should be regarded, I feel, as notes for a later poem.
I could not get into this as it felt like a muddled ramble that occasionally hit on a theme. For example, I cannot see much difference between:
Please feed the inquisitive nature of my soul.
I am curious, I know the normal defintion...
care to enlighten?
Intrigue?
Ahh at last what else the existence of a brook may be?

and
feed my curious nature
for what else the existence of a brook



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