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You and My Dreams

by hailfabio 

Posted: 11 August 2006
Word Count: 39


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Everytime I see you
in my dreams, you know me so well. I
guess that's why they're called dreams.

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Whenever I see you
in my dreams, you don't know me so well. I
guess they're not dreams anymore.






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Beanie Baby at 11:33 on 14 August 2006  Report this post
HMMMM!

Beanie Baby at 11:37 on 14 August 2006  Report this post
HMMMM!There's a hint of pensive sadness to this. We can all have secret dreams and desires I guess and you have captured here a distinct near-and-yet-so-far feeling.

It reads well and leaves me wanting more.
Beanie

Account Closed at 15:42 on 18 August 2006  Report this post
Very sad, and nice and subtle turning here. The more I read this one, the more I like it. And it's occasionaly nice to get a piece when the reader has to read again to get more out of it!

:))

A
xxx

hailfabio at 20:34 on 20 August 2006  Report this post
Thanks,

it's an extension of an earlier poem, nice thoughts.


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