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Fucked-up Love 2

by Bobo 

Posted: 03 September 2003
Word Count: 56
Summary: Am I the only one who has such an appalling love-life???
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You lied to me
once twice one hundred times

You silenced me
my cries my tears my hungry screams

You laughed at me
again again and yet yet again

You loved me
apparently - though not for real

I stab you
your flesh much softer than you

I mourn you
my love - one true love






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old friend at 14:22 on 05 September 2003  Report this post
Bobo,

No, Your love life is as appalling as the love lives of so, so many others. At least you have the courage to express this in the written word... and you express it well. Keep on!
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Fearless at 19:49 on 24 September 2003  Report this post
It's ok BoBo, mine is worse, much worse!

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Whether they lied once or a thousand times, the trust, that essence, is lost....rarely regained.
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chenny-17 at 16:59 on 06 October 2003  Report this post
hey i like that sorry your heart was broke and you couldn't get none
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Bibsy at 19:49 on 07 October 2003  Report this post
This poem brings back some sad memories in me.

I especially like the lines, 'I stab you... your flesh much softer than you'.

I also like your style - no flowery words, just simple, honest and powerful.
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MasterRevelation at 09:28 on 27 January 2004  Report this post
I didnt know you knew me - jeepers that was a painful one to read - knowing I am the other side of that knife -
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