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Household haiku

by joanie 

Posted: 04 August 2006
Word Count: 12
Summary: I'm away for a couple of weeks now. Just cleaning before I set off!
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Old-fashioned scrubbing
leaves spotless tiles but housemaid's
knee. Is it worth it?






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smudger at 21:51 on 04 August 2006  Report this post
I didn't take you for an old fashioned scrubber, but I loved the poem.
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tinyclanger at 15:25 on 05 August 2006  Report this post
Wow, Joanie, you clean before you go on holiday?
.....bowing in admiration
x
tc

Oh, smashing hiaku, enjoyed the positive/negative twist.
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The Walrus at 20:05 on 06 August 2006  Report this post
Made me chuckle. Legitimate question.


Christina
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Beanie Baby at 07:30 on 07 August 2006  Report this post
Good one - brought a rare Monday morning smile!
Beanie
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Account Closed at 13:11 on 11 August 2006  Report this post
No, it's not worth it, Joanie - trust me!!! But a lovely piece though. Hope you enjoyed your hols!

:))

A
xxx
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joanie at 09:14 on 12 August 2006  Report this post
Tony, tc, Christina, Beanie, Holly,
Just snatching a few minutes while I´m away. Many thanks!
joanie
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