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by o11ie 

Posted: 02 August 2006
Word Count: 83
Summary: My first ever completed poem belive it or not. It was brn in the early hours of the morning after many vain attemtps to write some meaningfull verse. hope you like it.

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Men only
Top shelf trash
Girl next doors
Fanny flaps

readers wife’s
fifty year old thighs
armature flicks
and swinging dicks

mobile phones
and fake moans
dildos like
traffic cones!!

Muscle Mary’s
Blue pill scary
Fake tits
And no hairy bits

Water sports
For sicker sorts
Shit eating
Elicits derisive snorts

Sally from Salford
Black cock only
Chris from fife
Fuck my wife

Northern chicks
With strap ons
Humiliation and
cheap kicks

Terraces houses
And massionettes
Maybe even
your local vet.


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The Walrus at 18:58 on 02 August 2006  Report this post
For my part, I feel your attempts have not been in vain. I like it for a couple of reasons. Firstly, I admire the bravery with which it takes to write a piece like this. Secondly, it is succinct and creates images which most people, whilst not wanting to admit having association with, cannot deny are real.


o11ie at 22:26 on 02 August 2006  Report this post
Thank you Christina, your very kind. I suppose I belive in writing as expression of truth. I appriciate your comments.


Tearteromy at 22:08 on 08 August 2006  Report this post
My favorite stanza is the Water sports for sicker sorts one...it made me laugh out loud. Well done!

o11ie at 22:23 on 09 August 2006  Report this post
thank you

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