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Hope

by hailfabio 

Posted: 18 July 2006
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Hope's impossible
but I hope it's
possible.






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Beanie Baby at 19:35 on 18 July 2006  Report this post
Succinct and to the point! One teeny suggestion - leave off the 'etc' I feel it would give the entire verse a lot more clout! Clever, deep-thinking stuff!
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joanie at 22:08 on 19 July 2006  Report this post
Hi Stephen. I agree with Beanie; without that 'etc' this causes the mind to spin! Brilliant.

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hailfabio at 11:25 on 20 July 2006  Report this post
Thanks for commenting, this is much better.

Stephen
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