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Posted: 11 July 2006
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Everytime I see you
in my dreams,
you know me so well...

Guess that's why they're called dreams.






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Beanie Baby at 07:25 on 12 July 2006  Report this post
Very sweet - has a soft longing to it that really tugs the heartstrings. Love it.
Beanie
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Account Closed at 09:28 on 14 July 2006  Report this post
Romantic and witty - very enjoyable! But what about:

Everytime I see you
in my dreams,
you know me so well...

Guess that's why they're called dreams.


Might bring out the sense more? Anyway, just a thought!

A
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hailfabio at 10:33 on 18 July 2006  Report this post
Thanx, glad you like it. I often come up with nice poetry after a night dreaming.

I think your right Holly B, that reads much better.

Cheers
Stephen
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