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QUIESCENT

by Beanie Baby 

Posted: 06 July 2006
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So what else?
What else is left
for us to take?
More gas?
More coal?
More oil?
Carry on as we are
and it'll be us -

We'll be the fugaious fuel.

People would have been-

End of stor ..................






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paul53 [for I am he] at 08:50 on 07 July 2006  Report this post
Clever use of the theme with an interesting and individual slant. I like poems that leave the reader to ask the questions.
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NinaLara at 14:43 on 07 July 2006  Report this post
I lack the cut off lines - which leave us to develop our own thoughts about destroying ourselves in the fight to burn things quicker, move quicker and live quicker ....

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although it is true I lack the cut-off lines, I did mean LIKE.
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