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28/06/06
Posted: 29 June 2006
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eople
Communicating in different ways
I’m here right now
Or am I there
My p is faulty
pppppppppp
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 joanie at 21:28 on 29 June 2006
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Oh, hell, Mark; So many 'p's are faulty! ...or 't's, or 'm's!! Take your pick.
joanie
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 paul53 [for I am he] at 06:15 on 02 July 2006
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Simple and effective. The second "right now" in line three might be unnecessary, and using the letter "p" gives rise to medical connotations.
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eddieg at 11:14 on 02 July 2006
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thanks paul... after looking at this again. i agrre with your views on the second right now.
M
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paul53 [for I am he] at 13:03 on 02 July 2006
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We can get lost in the detail, but the main thing to remember is to enjoy being creative and see it as an adventure.
I used to write a long poem every birthday as a "state of the union" address to myself, because I needed to set things down, put it to one side, then come back later and study it to find out how I was REALLY feeling about things, rather than how I was pretending to feel about things.
Whether that is something shared by many or just a personal quirk, I have no idea.
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