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by eddieg 

Posted: 29 June 2006
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Communicating in different ways
Iím here right now
Or am I there
My p is faulty

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joanie at 21:28 on 29 June 2006  Report this post
Oh, hell, Mark; So many 'p's are faulty! ...or 't's, or 'm's!! Take your pick.


Mr B. at 20:45 on 30 June 2006  Report this post
Simple and engaging - nice idea!


paul53 [for I am he] at 06:15 on 02 July 2006  Report this post
Simple and effective. The second "right now" in line three might be unnecessary, and using the letter "p" gives rise to medical connotations.

eddieg at 11:14 on 02 July 2006  Report this post
thanks paul... after looking at this again. i agrre with your views on the second right now.

paul53 [for I am he] at 13:03 on 02 July 2006  Report this post
We can get lost in the detail, but the main thing to remember is to enjoy being creative and see it as an adventure.
I used to write a long poem every birthday as a "state of the union" address to myself, because I needed to set things down, put it to one side, then come back later and study it to find out how I was REALLY feeling about things, rather than how I was pretending to feel about things.
Whether that is something shared by many or just a personal quirk, I have no idea.

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