
MY LIFERAFT - THE EDITOR`S FEEDBACK
 by  Beanie Baby
Beanie Baby 
| Posted: 21 June 2006 Word Count: 82 Summary: A little bit of sheer blood and guts determination here but I know most writers will identify with it. | 
 
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Words are pools
through which I wade,
and build my castles
with my spade
until I spot a tiny beach
where future success
lies in reach.
I stop and read
the editor's letter,
now my life is looking better.
Okay it's not a huge advance
that makes me sing
or want to dance,
at least she felt
my heartfelt work
was worth response -
to light the dark.
So words are pools,
and now I swim,
all because
I WON'T GIVE IN!!!!
through which I wade,
and build my castles
with my spade
until I spot a tiny beach
where future success
lies in reach.
I stop and read
the editor's letter,
now my life is looking better.
Okay it's not a huge advance
that makes me sing
or want to dance,
at least she felt
my heartfelt work
was worth response -
to light the dark.
So words are pools,
and now I swim,
all because
I WON'T GIVE IN!!!!
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