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InterGalactic Crimes (working title)

by Dangan 

Posted: 16 June 2006
Word Count: 1235
Summary: this is just something i came up with in the space of 20 minutes, i wrote 2 different intro scripts to a new saw movie, this is rather graphic so its not for the squeamish, enjoy! ^_^


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SAW 1 FANFIC

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as kelly awoke she saw a green fog around her
as her eyes darted around the dimly lit room, she saw nothing but an iron door, a small television and something covered in a red sheet, planted with tasers and what appeared to be car battery hooks.
she tried to move but her entire body was encased in a wooden mechanism, her arms were chained to the corners much like a torture rack.

either side of her were several spikes, still shining with blood, and above her was what resembled a drill, as sharp as a newly made knife
below her were two circular and very sharp spindal saws, which could easily tear her apart.
but none of this disturbed her as much as what she saw beneath those pairs of spindal saws....

a siv that covered a black bowl was below her, and she could only imagine what its purpose was for.
but before she had time to ponder, a clicking sound started around her, bouncing off the walls and hitting back at her ears.
the fear she felt when seeing those saws is nothing compared to what she feels now that the mysterious noise begins out of nowhere.
but as soon as her heartbeat races, the clicking stops
and the Television on the far right is switched on.

for a few seconds it was just static
then, the image of jigsaw appeared so quickly that it made her jump, she hit one of the sharp blades on her arm and screamed.
but as she did, she realised something was wrong.
no sound came out.
she tried again, but nothing.
she could speak, but not very audibly. only enough for her to hear, not anyone else.
"hello kelly" the deep voice said, its sound bouncing off the walls.
"i know you've realised that you cant scream and can barely talk now, thats because i removed most of your vocal chords in your sleep"

she winced with pain but his face merely smiled.
"you have been taking your life for granted up until now kelly, you've tried suicide before but you've known how that wouldnt work, should've known you wouldnt have the guts to slit your wrists..."
he chuckled slightly as a tear ran down her cheek, she'd heard about this before and knew it was only a matter of time before he said:

"i'd like to play a game with you kelly, you know the mechanism your attacthed to? well, that is one of my own personal inventions, i call it; "the human blender" you have 22 minutes to escape from the mechanism without anymore scratches or cuts or loss of blood. the more time you waste, the higher those blades rise, the lower the drill falls, the tighter those spikes enter.

"there are 2 pieces of string hanging by your mouth and left foot, you need to pull these to stop the mechanism, but i warn you, there are sensors around the room, and if any of them detect you, the blades will increase their speed and within seconds, you become soup."
he started laughing again as she began to sob quietly.
"if you can manage this, then a second task awaits you, you have 22 minutes. let the game begin"
the television switches off and kelly is left there, struggling for her life as the blades begin to move.....


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SAW 2 FANFIC

the first thing to start working again on stephan was his ears
and the sound that greeted him, was not a pleasant one.
it might have been easier if he hadnt known the voice, unfortunately, he did.
it was his friend steven, screaming out loud.
"for the love of fucking God! let me out! ahhhhhhhhh!!"
it was horrible to hear.
as he looked around the place, he realised they were in a wooden room.
he was sitting in a chair surrounded by a thick glass with air holes encased in barbed wire.
as he looked over at steve properly, he saw that his torso had a target painted on, but wait....that wasnt paint...
it was blood, stevens blood.
and stephan could see quite clearly where it had came from.
stevens stomach had been implanted with a dozen rusty nails.
and they were crawling with poisonous ants.
but there was nothing he could do for him at the moment,
as stephan looked around, he saw ryo hanging from the wall by a bear trap, and the base of its catch was 5 inches from her skull.

as her eyes flickered she started screaming, her hands were fumbling down her jeans as she pulled out a dictaphone from where steffan can only imagine was her vagina, that must have been why she was screaming.
ryo seemed to be semi concious, but fully aware of the bear trap by her head.
steven was still screaming as he thrashed around, kicking and flailing his limbs.
but then he suddenly stopped, his eyes rolled into the back of his head and his limbs just feel limp as hey lay there like a rag doll.
ryo played the tape and a familiar voice boomed out, loud enough for steffan to hear through the glass.
"hello steffan and ryo, i would greet your other friend steven, but im afraid i had to put him down for a while, he was giving me a headache. hahahahaha"
his laugh echoed through the room, and it made steffans blood boil.
"i would like to play a game with the two of you, there is an antidote for your friend before his body succumbs to the poison and his head evindentally explodes from the blood pressure, but i will only tell you how to get it if you survive the first game."

"ryo, im sure you know the beartrap that is inches away from your head, it merely needs one touch and your pretty little face will be ripped apart layer by layer of skin. but thats not all, i have been siphoning the air you've been breathing with a serum that keeps your whole body from the neck down in nearly a petrified state, i lowered the dosage just enough for you to be able to get the dictaphone out. there is a hole in the wall above you, and a sledgehammer will be lowered from it, it will be swung back and forth into the wall as its lowered, and you need to find a way to move out of its hit, otherwise your head will become dented and your face shredded.
but thats not all.
you then need to grab the sledgehammer and smash open the double glazed glass box your boyfriend is encased in before he suffocates.
the box is also highly laced with barbed wire, enough to pierce the skin and give the maximum pain.
and just to add a little more to the game, while your body is learning how to move again, tacks will be placed on the floor from the hole in the wall...
you have 12 minutes ryo."
the Tape stops and as ryo's eyes travel upwards, a rain of tacs drops onto the floor around her, then, a banging sound starts, as the hammer descends, and the second side of glass closes over steffans air holes.
the tape starts again as his voice utters;
"you took your life for granted before ryo, not anymore...12 minutes"


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