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I Am The Walrus

by The Walrus 

Posted: 29 August 2003
Word Count: 94
Summary: The first poem.


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Deep delicious sigh
Of freedom found.
Relief.
Tears.
No words.

Miraculous inexplicable meetings
The universal connection
Sodding adapter
Mislaid for so long.

Sniggers at a secret
Always there
Hidden from sight
Laughable.

Unbelievable.
Almost unbearable.
This lightness of liberation.
No words.

Fears lasooed
Dug heels pulled
Into the Light
Where they die
And rest forever

Goose-bumped liberation tickles.
Burbling bubbles of delight
Threaten to flood the dam
No words.

The cliches are true
No end
No beginning
Only One
Coursing strong and true
Endless.

I run, I dance, I fly.
I am the Walrus.






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Fearless at 12:18 on 29 August 2003  Report this post
Well......there's nothing I can say to that.
But.....fourth stanza has a typo on the 3rd line 'liberation' misses the 'a'.
Your writing is getting stronger. Much stronger.

Fearless

Bobo at 14:28 on 29 August 2003  Report this post
Stunning Walrus, purely stunning.

BoBo x

roovacrag at 15:20 on 29 August 2003  Report this post
Iloved this when i first read it..still do
alice xx

The Walrus at 15:45 on 29 August 2003  Report this post
Thanks Fearless, my constant critic.

Bobo, really glad you liked it. As I say, it was the first and was written on the pure high of freedom.

Alice, thanks, hope you like the small changes I made.

The Walrus

Lawrenco at 17:07 on 10 April 2004  Report this post
So this is where it all started !
You Beatle juicer,wonderment.

coo cacker chew. cha,cha,cha!

I was reading a quacko Beatles site and they reckon on the end of the song The Walrus ,there is a recording of King Lear on the end of it.
How absurd !
It wouldn`t be Easter without wishing you a good one...


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