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Fucked Up Love.

by Bobo 

Posted: 28 August 2003
Word Count: 64
Summary: Revisited this poem and made some changes....

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I loved you
so much,
so very hard.
I wanted you inside me
and ever.
There was only you in my dreams,
my thoughts.
The games I played
were never

You loved me too.
So much.
Too much.
Craved me deeply,
though never could say.
You tried to reach out,
I ignored you,
walked away,
out the door.

You didn't stop me.

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The Walrus at 08:48 on 29 August 2003  Report this post
No pulling punches here. It speaks, directly and honestly, painfully and succintly conveying the ecstacy/agony so many have been through.

I salute you.

The Walrus

Fearless at 10:03 on 29 August 2003  Report this post
I can't add anything to what The Walrus has written.
We've been there.


Bobo at 10:09 on 29 August 2003  Report this post
Thanks guys. I was at my lap-top last night and for some reason thought back to that past love affair...the way it got so distorted...and it still hurt, so had to put down a few lines from the heart.

BoBo x

Fearless at 10:13 on 29 August 2003  Report this post
Thank you for sharing it Bobo.


roovacrag at 16:07 on 29 August 2003  Report this post
This was written from the heart. I liked it.

MasterRevelation at 09:27 on 27 January 2004  Report this post
oh, and haven't we all been there!

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