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One Day

by mattswan 

Posted: 01 June 2006
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One day,
    too far from now

There will be an explanation,
    an understanding somehow

When will we get there,
    and how

Cannot be answered,
    right now

But i can't wait,
    can't wait 'til then

Because i know it'll be clear,
    see through at the end.






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joanie at 19:47 on 01 June 2006  Report this post
Hi, Matt. You're right, of course! Perhaps one day it will be clear. I like the rhymes and the form of this, which somehow lend themselves to the subject matter.

There is a quiet confidence and optimism here.

joanie
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Keight at 20:22 on 01 June 2006  Report this post
yeay optimism! i like this kind of poetry short and sweet :)
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mattswan at 23:50 on 01 June 2006  Report this post
Thanks for the comments, can't wait to upload more. But unfortunately as we know its only 1 every 2 days?
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radavies1uk at 22:52 on 06 June 2006  Report this post
Aye, drives me mad :) I like though that it gives me a goal, something new to try every 2 days, and I cannot procrastinate :)
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