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May

by joanie 

Posted: 29 May 2006
Word Count: 13
Summary: a haiku
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while sun warms the sky
hawthorn blossoms snow in May
covering the ground








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Keight at 18:17 on 29 May 2006  Report this post
it gives a pleasant mental image

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it has inspired me to make my first post a haiku, which although pales in comparison to this one i hope you like.
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joanie at 18:19 on 29 May 2006  Report this post
Thanks, Kate! Good to see you and welcome to WW. I look forward to reading your work.

joanie
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smudger at 20:45 on 29 May 2006  Report this post
Hi joanie,

I read your haiku and looked up to find that it describes perfectly the scene outside my window. :)

Tony
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joanie at 21:02 on 29 May 2006  Report this post
Thanks, Tony! That's what it's all about, I guess!!

joanie
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PantsonFire at 15:20 on 31 May 2006  Report this post
This is beautiful Joanie, I am usually wary of haiku but this is gentle and uplifting. thanks

J
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joanie at 16:28 on 31 May 2006  Report this post
Thanks J! Welcome to WW.

joanie
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Account Closed at 09:54 on 02 June 2006  Report this post
Ooh, love this one! A wonderful sense of clarity to it. Being me though, I'd ditch that 2nd line comma and let it fly untrammelled (ooh-err, I'm Ms Pretentious today ...!)

:))

A
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joanie at 15:12 on 02 June 2006  Report this post
Thanks Holly! You're right, of course; it's ditched already.

joanie
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Beanie Baby at 20:23 on 02 June 2006  Report this post
Brilliant haiku! Loved it!
Beanie
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joanie at 20:24 on 02 June 2006  Report this post
Thanks, Beanie. This is still happening as I type!

joanie
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